One Bratty Omega - Stephani Hecht 3 1/2 - 4 Hearts

Review written for MM Good Book Reviews

This story is part of a series and must be read in order. Donny is an Omega, because of how his father treated him Donny thinks he is useless and the way his pack mates treat him sometimes doesn't help. So what if he is a bit of a klutz and he sometimes does stupid things they could at least give him a chance. Proctor is coming to visit his best friend but what he finds at Black Creek has him suspicious, his friends are acting strange and there's a twink spying on them. Proctor can't deny the attraction he feels for the little twink though and soon pursues a relationship with Donny, but Proctor finds out the hard way that the town has secrets

This is a great continuation of the Building the Pack series, this time we have young Donny and Proctor, Connor and Josh's friend, leading the story. Proctor's cop instincts are instantly pinging when he is visiting his best-friend Connor, both Connor and Josh are acting oddly and Proctor is determined to get to the bottom of it. Donny is keeping an eye on Connor's and Josh's place while they have a visitor to ensure no secrets are spilled but he gets caught by Proctor and feels an attraction to the human. Both men embark on a friendship which quickly changes to more. Donny hates keeping secrets but he can't betray his pack, but when the evil wolf turns up again Donny doesn't know if Proctor will ever forgive him.

This story continues in the same vein as [b:The New Wolf|18211370|The New Wolf (Building the Pack #1)|R.J. Scott||25633078] keeping the unique fresh shifter story where everything isn't instant mates and easy acceptance. Both Proctor and Josh are great characters with Donny being sweet and bratty and Proctor being protective and suspicious, they fit together perfectly as they hang out and get to know each other (barring secrets) and when they finally get it on, wow are they hot! But as always danger comes and both Donny and Proctor handle it badly before forgiveness is sought and given. It wasn't all perfect as Proctor has to deal with the secrets the hard way and Donny acts like the brat he is and sulks, I did expect a slightly different reaction from Connor and Josh though seeing as what they had also recently been through, they could have been a bit more understanding of Proctor's reaction.

I recommend this to those who love shifters, danger, secrets, hot sex, finding love, great characters and life changing discoveries.